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Amante December 13th, 2010, 2:35 pm

It's ok to start with a scene like this. It leaves and air of mystery. You wonder what he is talking about.

You have great art, I love your crosshatching for shading.

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TheStranger December 19th, 2010, 8:57 pm

You look at mine comic so I'm looking at yours. You by far are a superior writer. How you beat me and you only have 2 pages. (insert smiley face) Look forward to seeing more.

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Mr. Henry January 5th, 2011, 10:16 am

I worked on a comic once that started sort of similar to this, so I know exactly why you feel it's boring. There's nothing wrong with starting this way as long as you keep the plot moving forward. Also, I like your art style.